tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post4706961207590726036..comments2023-12-27T03:05:02.311+08:00Comments on Living Loving and Writing: Friday Flash Fiction - week 47Laura Besleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-61907274337921930902013-06-05T14:39:06.504+08:002013-06-05T14:39:06.504+08:00Yes, he might be there a while...! ;) Thanks for r...Yes, he might be there a while...! ;) Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy the others. Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-44937197059345501592013-06-04T03:23:08.106+08:002013-06-04T03:23:08.106+08:00Hilarious! I'm a bit behind on your flash fic...Hilarious! I'm a bit behind on your flash fiction at the mo, glad I stopped to read this one though! Glad Jack wore his layers, he could have been stuck there a while.....ViolaSarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10281475235501919593noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-64493610957533861722013-05-31T16:01:18.389+08:002013-05-31T16:01:18.389+08:00Thank you. Yes, in the grand scheme of things it c...Thank you. Yes, in the grand scheme of things it could've been much worse! ;) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-47904445540232443362013-05-31T07:27:27.958+08:002013-05-31T07:27:27.958+08:00It could have been worse. I was imagining all sort...It could have been worse. I was imagining all sorts of horrible things one might dig out of the snow and taste. Nicely done!Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-90009733406597069722013-05-27T10:28:58.026+08:002013-05-27T10:28:58.026+08:00Yes, poor chap. Am sure the eldest one will get in...Yes, poor chap. Am sure the eldest one will get into trouble though, so I don't think he got away with it completely! Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-1081892361810093572013-05-27T10:28:23.909+08:002013-05-27T10:28:23.909+08:00Yuk! I suppose it warned off all the other kids th...Yuk! I suppose it warned off all the other kids though. Did the boy's tongue recover?! Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-61464542327329082142013-05-27T10:27:36.860+08:002013-05-27T10:27:36.860+08:00Despite being the eldest, it was usually my sister...Despite being the eldest, it was usually my sister who managed to trick me. She was obviously much smarter than me! ;) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-30727107902771674352013-05-27T10:26:46.203+08:002013-05-27T10:26:46.203+08:00Yes, don't know why I thought about snow... It...Yes, don't know why I thought about snow... It's hot here too, but not 85 degrees yet! Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-56129484306519766222013-05-27T10:25:49.931+08:002013-05-27T10:25:49.931+08:00Your comment really made me laugh!! :) Your comment really made me laugh!! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-18885539355542564072013-05-27T10:25:23.736+08:002013-05-27T10:25:23.736+08:00Thanks! :)Thanks! :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-658669645967171242013-05-27T08:38:21.323+08:002013-05-27T08:38:21.323+08:00Poor little guy. Evil older brother. Funny though....Poor little guy. Evil older brother. Funny though.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-55445144361065838572013-05-26T07:53:24.287+08:002013-05-26T07:53:24.287+08:00Ugh, I remember when a kid at my elementary school...Ugh, I remember when a kid at my elementary school did that. He got to keep his tongue, but there was this huge frozen glob of blood on the lamp-post until the thaw came. I suppose it made a good warning totem.<br /><br />This was really well depicted. I can't decide if the younger brother is more naive or the older brother more evil!Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-10181328948522968222013-05-25T21:16:13.032+08:002013-05-25T21:16:13.032+08:00oooo the evil elder sibling ;) I've been one a...oooo the evil elder sibling ;) I've been one and pulled countless fast ones over my trusting little sister - for my benefit usually. But Finley is the master, he got Jack for his pure amusement!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-26215072089570672202013-05-24T22:08:58.919+08:002013-05-24T22:08:58.919+08:00Nice change of scene from the 85 degree weather we...Nice change of scene from the 85 degree weather we've been having.<br />Made me think of that scene from A Christmas Story where the kid gets double dog dared to lick the flagpole.Bevimushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924337684790883853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-52160577867983382662013-05-24T20:31:28.480+08:002013-05-24T20:31:28.480+08:00Ahahaha! This reminds me so much of growing up wit...Ahahaha! This reminds me so much of growing up with my sisters. I loved them but, being the oldest, the one "in charge", I seemed to know everything to tell them to do so they "didn't get in trouble."<br />I'm good to them now, I swear. :)Fun story Laura!Deanna Schrayerhttp://deannaschrayer.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-383981355573364002013-05-24T20:30:24.253+08:002013-05-24T20:30:24.253+08:00Oh, this is so funny! It really made me laugh. Wel...Oh, this is so funny! It really made me laugh. Well done. Mxxxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-2880068028706737352013-05-24T18:22:21.834+08:002013-05-24T18:22:21.834+08:00Indeed. Let's hope he learns his lesson! ;)Indeed. Let's hope he learns his lesson! ;) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-76296258496050242822013-05-24T18:22:04.223+08:002013-05-24T18:22:04.223+08:00Yes, poor Jack! Glad it made you laugh - was suppo...Yes, poor Jack! Glad it made you laugh - was supposed to be a 'lighter' one than usual! ;) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-84284838335568979272013-05-24T17:51:42.246+08:002013-05-24T17:51:42.246+08:00aw this was funny and sad at the same time! There&...aw this was funny and sad at the same time! There's always one who will go first and in this case, he paid for it! <br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-19289255581261800122013-05-24T14:37:30.705+08:002013-05-24T14:37:30.705+08:00Ha ha! Poor Jack being manipulated by his older br...Ha ha! Poor Jack being manipulated by his older brother! Made me chuckle :) Churnienoreply@blogger.com