tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post5164994929094543935..comments2023-12-27T03:05:02.311+08:00Comments on Living Loving and Writing: Friday Flash Fiction - Week 31Laura Besleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-73114030959958914172013-01-18T10:15:31.073+08:002013-01-18T10:15:31.073+08:00Thanks a lot, Sarah! :)Thanks a lot, Sarah! :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-84700840039431600202013-01-18T04:13:33.649+08:002013-01-18T04:13:33.649+08:00Nice...didn't see the end coming. Your stories...Nice...didn't see the end coming. Your stories always make me want more!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04587594632756267997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-32017977283781393232013-01-15T16:19:18.767+08:002013-01-15T16:19:18.767+08:00Thanks very much for your comment, Sonya! Thanks very much for your comment, Sonya! Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-87899038252599347422013-01-15T02:06:32.382+08:002013-01-15T02:06:32.382+08:00The imaginary friend that overstays their welcome ...The imaginary friend that overstays their welcome - that's a great idea. Love how you revealed it at the end.Sonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351929216915547602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-79014826975252753272013-01-14T17:30:33.840+08:002013-01-14T17:30:33.840+08:00That's certainly true!That's certainly true! Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-50570349677867679692013-01-14T08:11:49.850+08:002013-01-14T08:11:49.850+08:00With friends like that, who needs enemies? Nice tw...With friends like that, who needs enemies? Nice twist at the end.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-10815477585850841452013-01-13T18:14:26.297+08:002013-01-13T18:14:26.297+08:00Thank you so much, Helen! That's very kind of ...Thank you so much, Helen! That's very kind of you :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-50877087721770984792013-01-13T18:07:49.107+08:002013-01-13T18:07:49.107+08:00That's definitely a possibility too! :)That's definitely a possibility too! :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-4084445538035440192013-01-13T18:07:25.442+08:002013-01-13T18:07:25.442+08:00That's very true! ;)That's very true! ;)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-56404593536789899442013-01-13T07:34:57.266+08:002013-01-13T07:34:57.266+08:00Oh wow, what an ending - excellent, sent shivers d...Oh wow, what an ending - excellent, sent shivers down me. I'm not fooled very often but this was one of the best twists I've seen in a long time. ^_^ Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-25147223731897358312013-01-13T03:06:15.736+08:002013-01-13T03:06:15.736+08:00I didn't see it as an imaginary friend, more t...I didn't see it as an imaginary friend, more the "bad side" we all have...don't we? Or is it just me :-)mazzz_in_Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-23794777636817881322013-01-12T19:45:23.498+08:002013-01-12T19:45:23.498+08:00I thought it was an older sister until the reveal,...I thought it was an older sister until the reveal, those inner voices of ours can certainly get us into trouble, can't they? Especially the one that says "Well... what harm can it do?"Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-14857852474744633532013-01-12T14:01:15.084+08:002013-01-12T14:01:15.084+08:00Indeed! I think I wanted there to be hints through...Indeed! I think I wanted there to be hints throughout, so that people would get to the end and think 'Aah, I should've/could've seen that coming'! ;)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-66747689823890714582013-01-12T01:06:07.915+08:002013-01-12T01:06:07.915+08:00An imaginary friend who tells you to sleep with so...An imaginary friend who tells you to sleep with someone is a dangerous friend indeed. Mum is quite right to ask! The first line almost gives the game away at the outset..did you intend that?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-87568616165770682392013-01-11T21:26:39.317+08:002013-01-11T21:26:39.317+08:00Thanks a lot! :)Thanks a lot! :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-48530517127911234242013-01-11T18:25:43.686+08:002013-01-11T18:25:43.686+08:00At least Sahar didn't get you into THAT much t...At least Sahar didn't get you into THAT much trouble! ;) xxxLaura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-23472267543410825962013-01-11T18:24:24.111+08:002013-01-11T18:24:24.111+08:00Well, somebody was going to! ;) Thanks for reading...Well, somebody was going to! ;) Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed it! Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-40947146439185006622013-01-11T18:23:47.256+08:002013-01-11T18:23:47.256+08:00Thank you! :) xxxThank you! :) xxxLaura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-79304722816929084892013-01-11T18:23:30.611+08:002013-01-11T18:23:30.611+08:00Indeed they can be! ;)Indeed they can be! ;)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-47563648694629866922013-01-11T18:23:13.509+08:002013-01-11T18:23:13.509+08:00Thanks a lot, Amalia! :)Thanks a lot, Amalia! :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-41444514699121524652013-01-11T18:12:41.926+08:002013-01-11T18:12:41.926+08:00I loved it too! Great twist but would have been gr...I loved it too! Great twist but would have been great without the twist too. The first couple of lines made me think of Sahar :) (un)fortunately this situation is all too common so it is current and realistic. XxxChurnienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-62762782849390370122013-01-11T17:51:28.782+08:002013-01-11T17:51:28.782+08:00I twigged it was an imaginary friend quite quickly...I twigged it was an imaginary friend quite quickly, but that didn't spoil the pleasure of reading your tale any! :-) Nicely done.<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-36903981714154929952013-01-11T17:28:07.832+08:002013-01-11T17:28:07.832+08:00How clever, that twist at the end! I really though...How clever, that twist at the end! I really thought there was another person until that last sentence. Loved it. Mxxxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-82043349352272898282013-01-11T13:24:58.791+08:002013-01-11T13:24:58.791+08:00Imaginary friends can be most untrustworthy. Jetti...Imaginary friends can be most untrustworthy. Jettison! John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-28206557996723239682013-01-11T13:16:31.690+08:002013-01-11T13:16:31.690+08:00I love this! The imaginary friend twist at the fin...I love this! The imaginary friend twist at the finish is perfect -- I have a huge soft spot for imaginary friends.Amalia Dillinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13005039978668326144noreply@blogger.com