tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post1236768259536705870..comments2023-12-27T03:05:02.311+08:00Comments on Living Loving and Writing: Friday Flash Fiction - week 34Laura Besleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-27187587611114277362013-02-06T10:35:50.964+08:002013-02-06T10:35:50.964+08:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Cilap infohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17797500465641710546noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-45062122190045921542013-02-05T13:58:33.732+08:002013-02-05T13:58:33.732+08:00Now that would be telling! ;-) Now that would be telling! ;-) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-42567562279322256752013-02-05T02:41:00.071+08:002013-02-05T02:41:00.071+08:00Hmm... the mistress?Hmm... the mistress?Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04587594632756267997noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-88739364793590525412013-02-02T14:06:56.365+08:002013-02-02T14:06:56.365+08:00Maybe much much more… Maybe much much more… Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-22549356064542592272013-02-02T14:06:09.538+08:002013-02-02T14:06:09.538+08:00You'll have to decide that!!You'll have to decide that!! Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-55629043591184503612013-02-02T14:05:03.643+08:002013-02-02T14:05:03.643+08:00Thanks for reading and commenting. You'll have...Thanks for reading and commenting. You'll have to decide what happens next! ;-)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-22295932902151773942013-02-02T07:11:36.577+08:002013-02-02T07:11:36.577+08:00Ooooh, I think there may be more to the relationsh...Ooooh, I think there may be more to the relationship between this woman and the girls father than just a helping hankie, maybe much , much more.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-43095002591682435712013-02-02T02:09:49.967+08:002013-02-02T02:09:49.967+08:00Had HE seen her since then, is the question I am a...Had HE seen her since then, is the question I am asking...Mxxxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-46534971966056669682013-02-01T22:33:34.060+08:002013-02-01T22:33:34.060+08:00The mystery deepens! I really liked this, but I wa...The mystery deepens! I really liked this, but I want to know what happens next! Nice job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-5336586360096665192013-02-01T18:23:25.410+08:002013-02-01T18:23:25.410+08:00Thank you very much for your thoughtful and kind c...Thank you very much for your thoughtful and kind comments. Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-8665691321264219852013-02-01T18:21:46.576+08:002013-02-01T18:21:46.576+08:00Thanks! :)Thanks! :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-47089293114130223082013-02-01T18:21:33.721+08:002013-02-01T18:21:33.721+08:00It does indeed. I've specifically chosen not t...It does indeed. I've specifically chosen not to reveal too much. Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-44936347006433843812013-02-01T18:21:03.965+08:002013-02-01T18:21:03.965+08:00Thank you, Helen, always appreciate your comments....Thank you, Helen, always appreciate your comments. Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-32627408859530173452013-02-01T16:02:53.446+08:002013-02-01T16:02:53.446+08:00And like most flash fiction, you let the reader do...And like most flash fiction, you let the reader do much of the work of figuring out what it’s all about; a good mental workout and leaving us, perhaps, wanting more…AB Singerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05081664992357181626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-5822062234661167372013-02-01T15:19:38.550+08:002013-02-01T15:19:38.550+08:00good work with innuendo, Laura. nice. good work with innuendo, Laura. nice. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-10531398883306756102013-02-01T13:47:05.223+08:002013-02-01T13:47:05.223+08:00I wonder what her story was. It raises all sorts o...I wonder what her story was. It raises all sorts of questions.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-18463974464950838772013-02-01T10:43:43.984+08:002013-02-01T10:43:43.984+08:00I liked how you captured the mood of the funeral p...I liked how you captured the mood of the funeral party and how the daughter worked through her mind to remember who the woman was.Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.com