tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post1599879307277251087..comments2023-12-27T03:05:02.311+08:00Comments on Living Loving and Writing: Friday Flash Fiction - week 45Laura Besleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-51884274221310039322013-05-15T10:44:31.905+08:002013-05-15T10:44:31.905+08:00Thank you! :) Thank you! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-49047131220518707532013-05-15T00:02:02.267+08:002013-05-15T00:02:02.267+08:00Great imagery and concept Laura - I liked this!Great imagery and concept Laura - I liked this!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-21700775162813881582013-05-14T14:27:22.592+08:002013-05-14T14:27:22.592+08:00Cheers Tim! :) Cheers Tim! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-81007488932067384842013-05-14T14:27:03.213+08:002013-05-14T14:27:03.213+08:00Thank you very much, Deanna! :) Thank you very much, Deanna! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-60424595301083310352013-05-13T10:28:49.011+08:002013-05-13T10:28:49.011+08:00Great use of imagery. Nice one.Great use of imagery. Nice one.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-19900535949075741772013-05-13T08:01:40.196+08:002013-05-13T08:01:40.196+08:00I agree, this is very well written with superb ima...I agree, this is very well written with superb imagery. Great story.Deanna Schrayerhttp://deannaschrayer.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-843864100005073282013-05-12T16:24:52.134+08:002013-05-12T16:24:52.134+08:00Thank you so much! :) Thank you so much! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-72134106300179289632013-05-12T16:24:35.983+08:002013-05-12T16:24:35.983+08:00I think traditionally that's what it's lin...I think traditionally that's what it's linked to, but I watched a science programme about the thin blue line around earth's atmosphere and that has always stuck with me. In this setting I found it worked. Thanks for commenting! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-63063021480043302702013-05-12T16:22:40.043+08:002013-05-12T16:22:40.043+08:00Thanks for that! :)Thanks for that! :)Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-77710213796518517832013-05-12T16:22:20.585+08:002013-05-12T16:22:20.585+08:00That's true - I hadn't considered that! :)...That's true - I hadn't considered that! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-72082133613598491882013-05-12T16:22:01.888+08:002013-05-12T16:22:01.888+08:00In my mind it was a woman, but I guess if could be...In my mind it was a woman, but I guess if could be a man. I hope there's something nice to look forward to too! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-41750535810924350892013-05-12T16:21:10.010+08:002013-05-12T16:21:10.010+08:00Thanks. Tried to find an original way of describin...Thanks. Tried to find an original way of describing anger. Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-82471640442162227722013-05-12T16:20:37.742+08:002013-05-12T16:20:37.742+08:00Thank you! :) Thank you! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-85807359690585195842013-05-12T16:19:57.751+08:002013-05-12T16:19:57.751+08:00Thanks! :) Thanks! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-2337008553148325662013-05-12T16:19:44.211+08:002013-05-12T16:19:44.211+08:00Thank you, Helen! :) Thank you, Helen! :) Laura Besleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08240502344590881772noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-24603277591461016322013-05-11T22:43:03.774+08:002013-05-11T22:43:03.774+08:00Very cool, lovely description. Very cool, lovely description. Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-25286154510709552642013-05-11T22:30:43.359+08:002013-05-11T22:30:43.359+08:00Not what I was expecting, but very well written. ...Not what I was expecting, but very well written. The "Thin Blue Line" made me think of a policeman...still this is also an interesting idea. Good job.AMelodyPearsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11640330236677427145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-45790287893573313142013-05-10T18:47:10.411+08:002013-05-10T18:47:10.411+08:00I really like that image of the moment of stillnes...I really like that image of the moment of stillness and silence as she says farewell.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-80860630568139639242013-05-10T17:15:34.092+08:002013-05-10T17:15:34.092+08:00I liked the contrast. Nice.
You could move on the...I liked the contrast. Nice.<br /><br />You could move on the something quite sinister now...or even into science fiction. Leela Panikarhttp://www.leela.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-5241491396135666602013-05-10T17:07:28.563+08:002013-05-10T17:07:28.563+08:00I liked the idea of the rush of wind on his/her fa...I liked the idea of the rush of wind on his/her face, let's hope there's something at the end to look forward to however brief it is xxx Churnienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-24395919505695144262013-05-10T16:11:48.321+08:002013-05-10T16:11:48.321+08:00like the image of the hot ball in her stomach shre...like the image of the hot ball in her stomach shredding off pieces through her mouth to emerge as words<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-50534658490523305922013-05-10T15:47:43.353+08:002013-05-10T15:47:43.353+08:00Beautiful, just beautiful, and very comforting. Beautiful, just beautiful, and very comforting. Mxxxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-29231306404970569192013-05-10T15:38:28.380+08:002013-05-10T15:38:28.380+08:00Awwww....very comforting. Awwww....very comforting. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6360908252479749167.post-76074320225912604022013-05-10T12:28:18.224+08:002013-05-10T12:28:18.224+08:00 Really nice writing! You take us there with the n... Really nice writing! You take us there with the narrator to the thin blue line.Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.com