Floating Petals by Leela Devi Panikar

About the Book

Title: Floating Petals
Author: Leela Devi Panikar
Publication: NanaDon, 2007
Summary: Collection of fourteen short stories. 

What I Think

I reread Floating Petals in order to write this review and enjoyed it just as much the second time as I had done the first. The story which shares its name with the title of the book remains my favourite. 'Floating Petals' is about Ma-Ling, an older Chinese woman, who refuses to have her feet amputated despite warning from the doctor that the gangrene may kill her. 

The last scent of blossoms was still in the air. She was five when her mother and the servants gathered around her on the east terrace, close to the Kwan Yin altar. On the altar, among the offerings of dumplings, fruit and flowers, joss sticks and candles, was a very special item - a pair of hand-embroidered red satin shoes. (p.10)

Leela Devi Panikar is a gifted storyteller with the ability to create and transport us into different worlds, whether they be other countries, other relationships or even other realities. She does this with apparent ease as her prose flows gently and beautifully. Some of her stories are sad, some are humourous, but what they have in common is that they are all deeply human - even 'Moon' which is based around the moon travelling to the earth - and evoke strong emotions. 

I would highly recommend this to any lover of stories, short or long.  

About the Author

Leela Devi Panikar is a fiction writer and author of two published short story collections: Floating Petals and Bathing Elephants. After twelve years of writing it is still a surprise to her that I she is writer. She comes from a business background and has owned and operated businesses in several countries and in Hong Kong: boutiques, antique shops, and pub/restaurants. She has travelled a great deal and has lived in Penang, Malaysia; Wales; and Vietnam. Currently she lives in Hong Kong.

Leela Devi Panikar - author interview

I am extremely excited to welcome Leela Devi Panikar to my blog today. I read, and was impressed with Floating Petals, so impressed in fact that I approached Leela with some interview questions and she very kindly answered them for me. I hope you enjoy learning more about this fascinating author and I will be publishing a full review of her book on Wednesday 11th December 2013.  

1. Tell us a little bit about yourself 

I am a fiction writer and author of two published short story collections: Floating Petals and Bathing Elephants. After twelve years of writing it is still a surprise to me that I am a writer. I come from a business background and have owned and operated businesses in several countries and in Hong Kong: boutiques, antique shops, and pub/restaurants. I have travelled a great deal and have lived in Penang, Malaysia; Wales; and Vietnam. Hong Kong is my home now.   

2. Can you give us some background information about the stories within the collection Floating Petals?
Floating Petals was fun to write. I was like a child to writing. The collection is simple and is an easy read, but the stories are thought provoking. The first story, “A Piece of Bread,” is about a child’s longing to attend school so she can read but her first day proves a disappointment. The inspiration for “Homeless Sparrow” came to me when a very large tree near a Kowloon car park was cut down to make way for an MTR extension. It tells of a bird’s search for a new home. We carelessly destroy the homes of millions of birds to make space for humans. “My Gods” shows the beauty of tolerance in a simple and cosmopolitan village. “Green” is absolute fear due to misunderstanding. “At the Railway” holds an amusing memory: it was inspired by the interesting contrast of me travelling with Gucci suitcases and a very efficient barefooted porter in a smartly pressed khaki uniform carrying my heavy cases on his head at a train station in Madras.

3. Why do you favour short story writing over novel writing?
Short stories give me a feeling of accomplishment in a very short time. To me a short story is like a postcard, and a certain jewel-like perfection is required to tell a story within such a confined framework. It’s a work of distillation and I like the challenge that it poses. Before Floating Petals was published I had already written two novels, both yet to be published, and I was writing one of the novels at the same time I was writing the stories in Floating Petals. Short stories were a break for me – they energise me, enhance my creativity. Ideas come bounding up and they require special care to develop smoothly and I enjoy the discipline of restraint. There is no time to ramble, to bring in many characters and scenes, to use a lot of adjectives and adverbs. Depth, knowledge and feeling are condensed.

4. Your book Floating Petals takes its name from the title of the second story about a Chinese woman who is suffering from the consequences of bound feet. Is there a particular reason for choosing that to be the title?

Small feet in delicately embroidered silk shoes were called floating petals in ancient China. This admiration for small feet gave rise to the custom of bound feet. I enjoy writing love stories: love not just between man and woman but among different people and in different relationships, and even amongst animals, as in the “The Homeless Sparrow” where the old male sparrow gives the young sparrow a home. When visiting someone in hospital I saw an elderly lady with very small exposed feet and I was inspired by the serene look on her face. I imagined her past and the pain she endured as a child to fulfil her hopes for love in the future. So it was for love and for the smallness of short stories in general that I chose this title to represent the entire collection. 

5. The introductory story, “Penang,” won the ‘BBC World “My Hometown” 200-word writing competition.’ Tell us about that.
It was the first time I had the courage to enter a contest. As it was to be only 200 words I was comfortable writing it. I did not know I was selected as a winner until a friend in Australia, from whom I had not heard in more than 6 years called me. She was listening to BBC radio while cleaning her bathroom. She said she heard I had won the BBC international short story competition. I was more than shocked. Soon after, when it was noon in Hong Kong, the BBC called me to stand by for a short radio interview.

6. Your stories are extremely varied. Has moving around the world enhanced your creative writing?
Yes, travelling does enhance writing. I have travelled a great deal, lived in four different countries, and in particular I love village life. This has widened my knowledge and given me the ability to see my characters in different situations.

7. Moving on from Floating Petals, what are you working on at the moment?
I am working on my third collection A Phantom Visitor and just about completing a novel, White Hibiscus, about a young girl growing up in a traditional Indian home in Malaysia and yearning to be independent. She leaves her home and goes overseas only to realise that everything she sought existed at home, she did not have to go overseas for it. I have been working on this novel off and on for a long time. I also write travel essays and blog about random slices of life.

8. How do you write? 
I write in waves that match my moods. I do weeks of frantic writing, and then I drop off and pursue other interests. I enjoy reading and photography. I used to paint and I mention it here in the hope that it may get me to go back to it. I seldom watch TV except for news. Coffee-shop writing has currently become chic since JK Rowling first wrote in one, but then her alternative was a small heatless room. I enjoy absolute quiet at home, sometimes with quiet sitar music in the background. 

9. What or who influences your writing or inspires you to write?
No one person or author or writing influences me but I do get a lot of encouragement from my partner Don (which sometimes borders on nagging, which I need). I also get much encouragement from my friends, and some people who have bought my books ask me when they can read the next one. That is a good feeling. Inspiration can strike me at any time – an image, a word, a place or a piece of music. I am never short of inspiration but only of time. I do have to try and squeeze 48 hours into 24.

10. Do you have any advice for aspiring authors?
I do, indeed. I know several writer friends who worry about what market they should write for. I don’t believe in “writing what sells.” I don’t ask Who am I writing for? but Why am I writing? What is it that affects me passionately? 

The best work comes from your heart, writing about something you want to share. And you use that emotion to just start. I am always amazed at how little I begin with and how, as I write, my pen and my keyboard take over. So much I did not know I knew flows out of me.

Often research is needed once you start writing. When you’re writing about something you think you already know, you’ll find questions arise about the details. Even with short stories I spend a great deal of time doing research, looking for accuracy of facts and those small rough diamonds worth cutting and polishing to enhance the story. 

Start writing, don’t just talk about it, do it. 

Friday Flash Fiction - Week 16!

Gemini

Room 1

“Here you are, dear.” A petit woman with heavy-rimmed glasses handed over a sheet of yellowed paper.

“This is what it all comes down to?” Evelyn said, gently taking the piece of paper from the woman behind the desk.

“Yes, dear. Now I’m going to leave you here. Take as much time as you need.”

Birth mother	Penelope Wilson
Birth father	Unknown
Date of birth	May 28th 1970
Time of birth	7:35pm
Place of birth	John Radcliff Hospital, Oxford
Name of adoption parents	Valerie and John Farrow

 

Room 2

“Can I just ask for the record why you’ve chosen to look for your birth parents?” Peter asked from behind a desk.

“I’m getting married,” Tim replied.

“Congratulations.”

“Thanks. My girlfriend, I mean fiancée, and I are both adopted.”

“I see,” Peter said, jotting the information down with a fountain pen. “Well, here you are. I’m going to leave the room. Take as much time as you need.”

“Thanks, mate.”

Birth mother	Penelope Wilson
Birth father	Unknown
Date of birth	May 28th 1970
Time of birth	7:15pm
Place of birth	John Radcliff Hospital, Oxford
Name of adoption parents	Paula and David Hersham

L. Besley

Today is the Day

Today is the day, Samantha thought to herself as she carefully dressed in skinny grey jeans and an electric blue shirt. She’d already blow-dried her shoulder-length blond hair and straightened it. She never wore make-up, but did apply a dab of cherry-red lip gloss. Yes, she thought again, today is the day.

Across the cathedral city James was walking towards the pub at the top end of the cobbled high street. He and Samantha had been there a handful of times, but tonight he could feel his stomach churning. He pushed open the heavy door and was hit by the sound of a cacophony of clinking glasses, voices and music. Amidst the chaos, he managed to order a drink and walked to a table near the back, under a painting by a local artist of the nearby harbour.

Samantha immediately saw him and smiled subconsciously at his lopsided haircut that his housemate had done for him and the familiar green polo shirt. Drink in hand she walked over to where he was sitting.

“Hey,” she said, sliding into the seat opposite him. “How are you?”
“All good! You?” 
She pushed a few strands of hair behind her ear. “Fine thanks.” 
“You know…” he said.
“Yes?”
“I think…”
“Yes?”
“Well…”
“James! Just ask me.” 
“You’ll say yes?”
“Of course!” 
“Thank God!” He breathed a sigh of relief and took her hand. “I’m so pleased.” 

L. Besley

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Flash Fiction diary

Last week was a bit of an experiment, so a big thank you to everyone who voted! It was almost a unanimous vote, so I hope you enjoyed ending A. I've deliberately left it open, so you can decide for yourself what happened! 

This week's Flash Fiction is also a little experimental in style. Feel free to let me know what you think and whether it worked for you. 

This week I was a guest blogger on Leela Devi Panikar's blog, with a piece of Flash Fiction.  Click here to read Moving On. 

I've also started a 6-week online Flash Fiction course with Calum Kerr. I'm really excited to be learning more about this style of writing. 

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Flash Fiction is short enough to read whilst you're waiting for the kettle to boil. It's fairly quick to write too, but with it being so short, every word has to count. 

On 4th May 2012 I decided to embark on a project: to write a piece of Flash Fiction every day. I'm hoping this will keep the creative juices flowing and ultimately help me hone my craft. Every Friday I'll be posting 'the best of the week' onto my blog for you to read. If you have anything to say (good or 'constructive'!), I'm open to comments.  

Thanks, as always, for reading.