Friday Flash Fiction - Not a Day to Remember

Not a Day to Remember

She couldn’t do it. She just couldn’t. No matter how hard she tried, it just wasn’t possible. She’d lost count of the amount of times she’d tried and then failed yet again. How was it possible that she just couldn’t make it work?

‘Sandra?’

She jerked her head up. ‘Yes?’

‘Are you in there?’

She could just picture him standing outside the bathroom door in his three-day old boxer shorts and grey vest. Soon he would rap the door with his hairy knuckles. 

‘Tap, tap, tap.’ 

There it is. Soon he’ll start shouting. 

‘Sandra. Come out this minute.’ 

She turned the taps off and the quiet filled the small dank room for a few seconds. 

‘Sandra!’

She pulled the dressing gown tight around her and felt inside the pocket for her mobile phone. She quickly splashed some water on her face and reached for the striped towel, hanging on the back of the bathroom door. 

‘Finally. For fuck’s sakes. What have you been doing in there?’ 

‘Just showering.’ 

‘Christ, woman, you’d think you hadn’t showered for a year the amount of water you’ve just used. Good job we ain’t on a meter.’ 

‘Sorry,’ she mumbled. 

‘Well, piss off then,’ he said, pushing her out of the way. 

She stood in the hallway looking at all the closed doors, not knowing which way to turn. One day she would send that text, or make that call, to help her get out of this miserable situation, but today was not that day. She walked to the living room, plonked herself down in a tattered armchair and flicked on the TV. 

Laura Besley

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Flash Fiction diary

The challenge to write a piece a day is officially over. I'm so in love with flash fiction that I'll keep on writing it and hopefully still have a piece a week to share with you (my wonderful readers). I would like to dedicate some time to reworking older pieces as well as more time to writing longer pieces. Watch this space!  

This week I got a mention in a local Hong Kong newspaper, the South China Morning Post! It was as part of a book review for the Hong Kong Writers Circle's latest anthology, Of Gods and Mobsters. Click here for the link. 

Flash Fortnightly #16 is a previously published piece from my blog. It was popular, which is why I decided to republish it with Artipeeps! Click here for Down the Hill. 

HKWC - Open House

The keen followers of my blog will know that I was doing a reading on Saturday. This was my first public reading of a piece of work written by me. Actually, apart from reading books to my young students, this is the first public reading I've done ever! Anyway, I've lived to tell the tale, and would definitely do it again.

Trying not to shake too much! (photo: Liz Beer)

The event was organised by the Hong Kong Writers Circle, which is a very active group of amateur and professional writers based in Hong Kong. 

Dani Lowry, co-editor of As We See It: Hong Kong Stories,
read from her story: Broken Promise

There were two sets of readings. The first readings were by Dani Lowry and Edmund Price. Dani, one of the co-editors of As We See It: Hong Kong Stories, read from her short story in the anthology, Broken Promise. Edmund read from his recent publication, Thief of Love, a powerful love story about about the gods and their impact on us. Alan Brown read from his recent publication, Heavens Above, and I read a piece of Flash Fiction titled A Fond Farewell (see below for story). 




Thanks massively to the people who took time out of their busy schedules to come along and be supportive: Angharad, Arlene, Alexias, Frances, Liz, Michelle, Neeko, Shannon Young, Sharon, Shobha Nihalani and Simon. Thanks also for encouragement across the miles: Beatrix, Chanelle, Dorothy, Mum, and Sara. Nick probably knows the story by heart; he helped me edit it when I wrote it and helped me practise reading it outloud. However, he still managed to look interested whilst I was reading, so thanks for that too!

A good turnout! (photo: Simon Lawfull)

For those of you who weren't there, or didn't quite catch every word, here is the story I read: 


A Fond Farewell


As I stare at myself in the mirror, I wonder if I'm doing the right thing. I struggle to make my tie lie flat, something my wife always did for me. But not today. Today I'm leaving her for a woman I've just met. 
  My whole working life I commuted to the city on the 7:42 train with a flask of tea and a home-made sandwich. One chilly Tuesday, I noticed a woman on the platform wearing a bright turquoise scarf. Mary would never wear that colour, I thought. The woman was taller than average, even in flat leather shoes. She had curly brown hair and wore dark-rimmed glasses. Once seated on the train she pulled out a Penguin classic and was totally absorbed until Waterloo station. 
     I hadn't picked up a novel since the days of obligation at grammar school, but that crisp evening I bought the same Penguin classic in the station bookshop. I saw her nearly every Tuesday for a year and bought all the books I watched her read. The shopkeeper soon knew to look out for me. My colleagues, unaccustomed to my reading, threw friendly jibes my way. My wife and I enjoyed debating the various characters and plots.  
  One Tuesday she wasn't on the train. Three or four weeks passed and I stopped looking for her. I realised I wasn't going to see her again. I began to choose my own books, but it wasn't the same, not knowing if she was engrossed in the same tales.  


Years later, having recently moved to an unfamiliar part of town, I caught sight of her again. She was sitting at a wooden table sipping frothy coffee. Her face was rounder, her grey curly hair shorter; but essentially she was unchanged. Her eyes, despite their crow's feet, were still dark and intense behind her rimless glasses. How many words had they read since I last saw her? 
     “Are you enjoying it?” I said, nodding at her book. I showed her my identical copy. 
“Yes, immensely.” Her voice was deep, like melting chocolate.
     “May I?” She nodded.  
Slowly lowering myself into the seat opposite her, I added, “I think I prefer his last one though.”
     “Me too.” She smiled.     
“I’m Roger,” I said, and held out my hand.   
     “Catherine.” She took my hand. Her name is Catherine.
I grew to enjoy our weekly afternoon meetings. One day I asked her to dinner.
     “That would be lovely,” she said.   
“Splendid!” I replied. “I know a nice little Italian place not far from here,” realising I hadn't felt this happy in a long time. 

Mary left me years ago when the cancer cells silenced her forever. God, I've missed her. Tonight, getting ready to meet Catherine for dinner, I'm finally able to leave my wife. 

L. Besley

Another first!

This Saturday, for the first time ever, I'll be reading a piece of fiction written by me to the general public in a bookshop in Hong Kong. Let me explain. 

Every year The Hong Kong Writers Circle put together an anthology. The 2011 anthology, As We See It: Hong Kong stories, was published at the end of 2011 and is available to buy in selected bookshops in Hong Kong, and as an e-book through Amazon UK or Amazon US. To promote the book a few of the authors will be reading their stories, or extracts from longer pieces of work they currently have available.  There will be drinks available and authors won't be reading the entire time, so it's a good opportunity to have a chat and meet some new people. If you fancy coming along, please do!






The event, as promoted by Time Out magazine, will be taking place:

• in: Dymocks, Central Building 
• on: Saturday 26th May
• at: 5.30-7.30pm.   

I'm just a little nervous (= a lot!) so I'll let you know how it goes!